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Hello NerdBurga, Welcome to YWS, I'm Fantasy and I'm the person who has reviewed this work. The stuff in bold is what I've said, okay. She sat in bed, a ...

Wow! This is absolutle fab!! I loved the way this was written. You wrote the actual feelings of how a normal girl who has a crush would react in this ...

Hello, I've taken into account that you wrote this when you were little. I've posted a story which I had written when I was little, and lets just say....I thought ...

Hello, I've been reading your work so far, and I've only just reached this chapter. I love the story line plot, however, I think that you need to make the ...

Thanks, guys! Here's Part 2: ------------------------------------------ There was a long pause again. If it were not for a knock at the door, no one would have been moving. Ellaine answered ...

Whispering winds speak With sweet tones of sorrow Through Autumn leaves Through all the long night Winter moon blows with bright love Sleet her silver tears Weeping clouds up high ...

Wow. I've found another person who writes similar poetry to me. I love this types of poems as they get you thinking about life. Being repetative is fine, but try ...

Wow! You totally have me hooked in your story. I'm not really a critic, but more of a reader, and I must say; your story is really cool! It took ...

Wow! Thats one scary story. Very intersting, I've got to admit. But, I've got this one small question: How does a tramp (Full grown adult, I'm assuming) fit into a ...