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  • Short Story » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: It's A Cells World After All

    110 in fact! We are glad you enjoyed it. All The Best, Fangirl/ed ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for the review, we did get an A PearlFire

    Feb 22, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 1.1

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    Hello! First off, I'd love to say that this story interested me right of the bat. The steampunkish feel is something I've always loved to read. I also like the ...

    Feb 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: One Last Stand

    Thank you for your review. My grammar is not the greatest, and sometimes I have noticed my accent slips into my writing. I appreciate you giving your time to go ...

    Feb 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Ties That Bind, Chapter 1

    Thank you for such a detailed review! I will admit after what you have pointed out, I truly need to go back over my story better. The nitpicks really help ...

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: One Last Stand

    Thank you for your review! After rereading it, it does get a little confusing at the flashback and I completely see your point. All The Best, Fangirl/ed

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: One Last Stand

    Thank you for your wonderful review. As I said this is an old work of mine and honestly I wrote it very quickly. I do see your points, though, and ...

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: To you, From me.

    Among other things yes. :D

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: One Last Stand

    Thank you for your review. I hadn't actually noticed the similarities and in all honesty just wrote it for fun, but I'm glad people can take something more from it. ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Ties That Bind, Chapter 1

    Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it. I never noticed that I measured Theoren's age wrong, and I will definitely go back over the comma situation. It ...

    Dec 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Ties That Bind, Chapter 1

    Thank you for your review. I love to here what people have to say about my stories no matter what.

    Dec 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Ties That Bind, Chapter 1

    Thanks, Pearl.

    Dec 14, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Ashes

    No, I haven't. At that point I was not quite into writing, maybe I will now, though.

    Dec 14, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Ashes

    Hello! FangirlDivided here with a review. This story was beautifully written and described. I almost cried through a lot of it. I had a basset hound once that we had ...

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Ties That Bind, Chapter 1

    Thank you so much for this review. It warmed my heart to know that somebody enjoyed my story. This really brightened my day.

    Dec 13, 2016


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