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Re: This Posted is Dead. Don't read
Thank you for your help. I am going to start editing right away. I hope you can finish and help some more. Thanks.
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: The Kansas City Affair: The Strawberry Blonde One *edit
The only thing really that i have a problem with is that, it's confusing. In the beginning isn't April being rape, Is Gregory the rapist, and what does Ketchup has ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: After Words: Chpt 1 (Ania) part 1
I Really loved your story, it was great. The only thing that i would really change is more Description about your characters and maybe a little of what going on.
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Poison Love
I think it was great. I love romance stories and fantasy stories so your title really caught my eye.
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Wolf Moon- Prolouge
I love it. Your prologue really grabs the reader attention and holds it there until the ends.
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Prologue of my story
I think that it was great. You should post more. In my opinion you catch the readers eye with this. You shouldn't be scared to post anything it great way ...
Dec 9, 2008