FallingFromGrace

Thank you very much for this very kind review. Do you have any suggestions as to how I could change the "I can't believe" to make it stronger?

You were very close. I wrote this about my ex-boyfriend who basically used me to get what he wanted. The "Ace" reference refers to me realizing that I'm better than ...

This is both lovely and sad. I'm not seeing many criticisms, though I may change a few words around here and there. But overall, this is structured very well. I ...

This is a very beautiful story. One criticism: The word "college" is spelled "collage" twice, but the third time it's spelled correctly. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. I ...