Fall_Into_The_Sky

more please

great story i don't think you should have gotten in trouble for it it's a very nice story

thanks

Final draft: It was a dark and damp night in the cave. Rena stirred sleepily in the distance. She dreamt of the night that her childhood was lost as she ...

nice and well written

thanks this is just my first story ever written i wrote it as a present to my bf

haha yea the story needs a lot of work

thanks guys i'm new to poetry and story writing so bear with me untill i improve :)

wow harsh critiques lol but i'll take or advide and work on it

great story one thing though u need quotation marks around words spoken by characters.

oo more more i love romance novels

i thoroughly enjoyed that anymore to the story?

dang that story was good. i'm been addicted to it since i started reading it last nigh.

nice story it kind of cracked me up by the last part They after him getting away an ambulance runs him down.

great start of a story as said space it out more e.g. paragraphs with a few lines inbetween i look forward to reading more