FallWolf

Thank you very much for your in-depth review, Flame =) Thank you especially for noting my excessive use of semicolons, as I have just recently started to [try and] use ...

Thank you very much Angel for pointing out that part about the nightlight being a heirloom! To tell the truth, I was so physicked about finally having another good story ...

Thanks for your review NympheaLily =) I actually thought a bit about if I should do "friends" in quotations or not. On one hand, she was too young at the ...

Thanks Codayy for your review =) This story is actually symbolic (my first actual try, so it's probably not very good...) but there was no "symbolic" genre. This is also ...

Okay, this isn't anything really important but I just wanted to say, I started reading this and I immediately thought "High Priest Julius from The Unwanteds has started taking over ...

lol, thks brother XD Your first review! Well done =P Hopefully you can find some cool sci fi to critique as well. Post again soon (or else ^^ lol, jk ...

Hola carbonCore =) Thank you for your very in-depth critique of my work. If you like, I have written a small explanation below of why I am not using all ...

I am especially intrigued by how the hens are getting out... did the little stone guy let them out? Is there a secret passage? Can't wait till next chapter =)

Okay, this is now the second draft! @jessiebear (hopefully that tag worked, still new to this =P) Hope you enjoy guys =)

@jessiebear Second draft up =) Hope you like!

No, that's fine jessibear =) I should really fix this story (I've gotten some great help!) but I just haven't had time to re-do it yet. If you would like, ...

Hey Backroadstraveller =) Really looking forward to the next addition to your story! On the subject of how characters talk when they are mad, people have some really funny ticks ...

Yay! I'll have to check the second chapter out =) Love when writers do cliffhangers XD

Hokey Dokey =) Thanks felistia! I'm trying to perfect my critique before the November Review Day begins/

Thank you very much for your in-depth review nosirrah123 =) I will get to doing another draft of this right away! Thanks especially about the confusion of present-tense and how ...