Falcon_Ablaze

Thank you all! I really appreciate it.

Wow, thank you all for taking the time to review this. It is much appreciated. Glad you all liked this piece. Amazing, no bashings yet :D . GryphonFledgling: That's cool ...

Thank you both for taking the time to review my work. Squallz- Thank you so much for giving me your honest opinion. It helps a lot. I must agree with ...

Thank you :D . If you ever want a critique let me know. -Falcon_Ablaze

Thank you :D . I'll work on that.

Thank you both so much! :D I am going to fix that stuff right now. this is probably one of the best I've read so far!!! I highly doubt that ...

Hi, OK, now I'll do chapter 3 :) . After we left the town in a rush, we headed towards a mountain range that’s about half a day hike from ...

Oops! Sorry. I just realized that my MC's name spelled different ways. Its supposed to be spelled Cuilén.

Grrrrrrrrr!! :x :x *Shakes computer. Regains composure* OK, I'm going to try this again since my computer kinda went haywire. Now that I'm bright eyed and bushy tailed (sorta :) ...

Okay, Okay, I know what all of you are thinking. "This is really long and really boring". I've given this speech to 200 people and only three or four have ...