Faerlan

I liked the layout of it, and the way the poem felt sort of chlostrophobic to read, mainy because everyone knows what it feels like to have to be at ...

I didn't like the repetition of 'grow up' in the first stanza, and I thought the sixth line was a bit short to keep the rhythm flowing. However, other than ...

I know lots of people like that, and I think the poem really captures that kind of feeling. I love how by describing the girl, it is showing how giving ...