Fabien

I thought this was wonderfully written. I like how with each stanza, a piece of time goes by, almost as if they were each a chapter in the cat's life ...

I liked it, it was written very simply, meaning that I could read it from start to finish with no complications. Wait, hold that thought, in the lines, "So tell ...

It's symbolically beautiful and simply beautiful in itself. It's a very interesting concept of leaving childhood and entering adulthood which can be a pretty edgy subject at times. I thought ...

Wow, I've never read anything like this before. I liked the comparisons that you used. I liked the idea of 'us and them'. The descriptions of the characters were very ...

Wow, this was wickedly intense! It sure is a different story of the Smurfs that we read about when we were children, eh? It was well done, except I have ...

The words of the first stanza gives it a really sad and lonesome feel to it which sets it up for the remainder of the poem. It is very picturesque ...

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece of writing. I liked the depth it had and the words that you used to portray this scenario. It was really descriptive and in ways ...

So yes I was kind've confused after reading this, maybe if I read Wallace Steven's work it would help. Putting the confusion aside, I enjoyed it, I think that black ...

This comment is just for the imagery, I don't know about other readers but I get vivid images flashing in front of my eyes as I digest the words, letting ...

I enjoyed it. I thought it was a good projection of the day & age where youth think they are invincible & immune to death, cause they are so young ...

Very lovely, very vivid, very soothing. Your lines are filled with words that blossomed into beautiful images. Your piece put me in a very tranquil borderline dream like state. But ...

Well, well, I'm new to this whole forum thing, but people's opinions of other's work are very varied. I've taken a bit of what Claudette said, "It's still just as ...

. . .Intense That was the word that popped into my head after reading your piece, never read anything like it. I love the opening line. And "chug-chugged along home ...

It started off well. Whilst reading the first stanza I expected it to be a rhyming poem, but it petered out after that first verse. There seemed to be a ...