The words of the first stanza gives it a really sad and lonesome feel to it which sets it up for the remainder of the poem.
It is very picturesque and there are little snippets that co relate with similar past experiences of mine, you've been able to portray it beautifully even if it is a sad subject, so kudos for that.
It's all very descriptive and puts you into the mood that the character is feeling, which is what good poetry is supposed to do.
I like how you tied it all together in the last line, very powerful I might add.
It is a poem that conjures up that feeling of longing, and it couldn't have been done a better way.
Of what I've read of your poetry I think I've stumbled upon a new favorite.
Points: 890
Reviews: 52
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