Extraterrestial

Sorry this post is way too late, but i'm posting this anyway. I thought this was a great death scene, and was really gripping. lol wish i could write like ...

Hey i thought this was great and very entertaining. Also the dialog was cool. but i didn't understand it, which was real shame as i haven't read the other parts ...

Hey I'm not much of a critic so ill just say it in few words. First of all i loved the language you used, and the effect of when her ...

i liked it until the bit when clumbo got attacked, it left me wondering because it wasn't explained in any detail what so ever. So if you could add more ...

I thought this was a brilliant piece, i think the cat idea was cool and totally original. Same as the others, they beat me to the grammar mistake.grrrrrr. I hope ...

Found no grammar mistakes once again-grrrrrr. Although i think the parents death could have been a little sadder, and to me it all seemed rushed, but that's my opinion. Just ...