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Thank you so much :-)

Thank you :-) I'll do some editing to spread out the plot stuff before I put up ch3

Oh great, I'll find them tomorrow :)

Thank you! :)

Thanks for your review :)

Well, I'm not sure how humans got to Narnia but by the time Caspian's in charge there are loads of them so I thought I'd make a start on the ...

You're welcome :)

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Oops, I accidentally put that up twice. Sorry, I'll try to get that down.

Oh my God, the speech thing. I've actually explained that to someone before in a review! I've been trying to work on the long sentences so thank you for bringing ...

Yes I suppose I could describe more of Jonnie's rage towards Allun

Thank you so much! :)

Thank you very much for review. I'll keep that in mind when I'm editing :)

Cool :)

Yeah I think you might be the first Brit I've come across, never mind a Scot :) and yeah, sorry about my political ranting

of course :)