ExOmelas

Cheers, Esca, it was actually me who wrote this section. I wasn't sure about posting this chapter yet because I didn't think the ending was an important enough point. If ...

@Mess, could you include me as co-writer next time so I get notifs? @beans Thanks for the feedback. Believe it or not, this is a rewrite of a chapter that ...

Oh, is it up again? Nate usually has a red-alert going when the green room starts to fill up :P

Ah, jeez. -runs around and reviews everywhere-

I once knew someone who was so passionate about it. This is technically grammatically incorrect, but I can see why you would put it in. It doesn't quite work, unfortunately. ...

No problem :) Remind me in about a week if I haven't reviewed chapter 18.

I will think about the swearing. Just, in my experience, teenagers swear :P And thanks for the rest of it. I see what you mean about the relationship and the ...

Haha, thanks Ganga! :)

I disagree with the stance overall but some of these points actually do make a great deal of sense, especially the one about the "mask". I might come back and ...

I did meet him once but he's in his eighties now. Also, he's nothing like this in real life. And thanks.

Haha, good to hear :D

Yeah that makes sense. I was just worried it was going to go all Twilight-y and they were going to find a magical way to make it work. It's going ...

No problem :)

You should definitely be happy with some elements of it, especially the strong thread of plot running through it.

Ok, just make sure when you edit it, everything you just said comes through in your writing.