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ahhh ok. It's not a huge thing - I'll definitely keep reading and let you know if it does :)

Hey Blue, the only thing I'd say is that I know it makes sense for Edna not to be surprised on seeing the wizard, but I do think she would ...

Wow you are really fast at responding O.O Yeah...I can't actually remember what the "usual" meant. I think I meant that they were digging deeper than usual, but that usual ...

No worries, totally understand being busy :)

Got really confused for a second trying to remember what aliens were in it, then realised I was thinking of the chapter I'm writing at the moment. Up to like ...

Oh good lord I'd forgotten about this! 100% agree with everything you've said and if I ever did redraft this it would look very very different XD

Thanks, Matt :) don't worry, no rush. Yeah, the fast pace is cos this was for school and I had a word limit XD

Re: complected - fair 'nuff Showing and telling: I can kinda tell you've been working on it cos sometimes you show really well. Since you know what it is, I ...

Thanks, I may well do :)

(THBT = This House Believes That)

@Autumns Hey, I just thought you might be interested to know that one of the long preparation motions for my national debating competition is "THBT India should give up its ...

uh...are you seeing those speech marks as html too...?

Thank you so much for reviewing this so quickly! Hm...let's see. I kind of want to keep the Archess looking out the window because she's watching her kids, which I ...

Hey, thanks for the review :) I hadn't noticed the POV issue so I'll go back and have a look for that. As for description, yeah it probably was a ...

Oh. This was during review day so maybe I was rushing a bit. I'll go back and check. Still maybe want to specify it was the one from the previous ...