ExOmelas

Dammit. I hate science xD See, I need them to be far enough away to be looking at other planets with life that aren't earth, but close enough to have ...

The letters - oops, that's left over from when this was basically star trek parody. What do you think would be better - I think I'll just change it to ...

Things I thought of as I was changing some things: 1. I actually tried to characterise Gerry a bit (he becomes important later). I'm guessing that didn't work? 2. Was ...

First I'll respond to some of your nit-picks: 1. Will work on that and let you know when I have a result. 6. I'm struggling quite a bit with clarity ...

Ok cool, good to know :)

Sweet. I'll put that in in a moment :)

Hm...this could become quite an interesting question. I highly contest that animals are sentient beings. Like, they don't have self-awareness, they don't have thoughts, they don't have memories - just

Will fix all nit-picks. Oh actually, the laughing thing. I want a sort of ironic, bittersweet laugh. Like, I think that's a thing. Do you know what I mean? I ...

That's ok but it's not your fault you didn't in the first place, unless you think it's because I changed things about while you were reading. Do you think it ...

I've gone back and forth on whether Lezeki should be normal size or not but I've decided he's normal size. I'll specify that the camera is zoomed in. I didn't ...

goddammit it is the same problem xD gahhh! okay um, so at this point I need to make it clear that the fly-things are causing the problem with the psychic ...

Ah, that's what you meant. I think I'll change the bit at the end of the previous chapter rather than this.

Ohhhh I see. Okay you know how in the first chapter you said you didn't get the "psychic link...help" bit - I changed that to Chip not knowing what Treego ...

If you are, quite rightly, annoyed by how pernickety the reply system is for recognising speech marks: Luckily, Margo filled the gap in conversation and more. The questions and worries ...

I think I fixed the conversation quite simply: Luckily, Margo filled the gap in conversation and more. The questions and worries tumbled out of her. %u201CThere%u2019s more and more cases ...