ExOmelas

So like, it's not really up for interpretation. If I'd written "Je m'appelle Biscuits" and annotated it as anything other than "My name is Biscuits" that would have been factually ...

Hehe I'm afraid that stanza was just an example of me being not taking enough time to make it work. I'll try and fix it xD

Oh dear christ I'd forgotten about this O.O This is like taking looking at someone's old profile pictures to a whole other level xD If you look at the review ...

Thanks for the review! Those suggestions sound good, I'll see what I can do :)

ahhh fair. Yeah, I can imagine not a lot of editing gets done while an LMS is ongoing xD

hehehehe I was wrong. This is the edited version, which suggests to me I did not go far enough xD

Uh-oh. I can't find my updated version o.o

Oh dammit I'd actually had similar comments from Storm and edited but forgot to upload it here. *rushes to update just in case this happens again* I recommend giving the ...

Ah, okay. I'll reword that a little :)

Hey MJ, thanks for the review. What gave you the impression that she was enjoying the washing and I'll correct that/make it explicit that she has mixed feelings? Also Sparky ...

Hey so I read this review a couple of days ago but was too busy to reply to the time. Here is what I remember of what I was going ...

Hey there, thanks for your review :) I'll look at each of the changes you suggested and see what I can do about them. On an intellectual level, I understand ...

Now that I know the context, I actually think it's slightly odd that they're already such good friends that they're inventing things together. The combination of Ellipse feeling alienated atm ...

Oh look, I caught up with myself!

Ah, that's fair. One time my friend asked me if I knew this person called Elias and I said something like "I've never met... I don't even know whether to ...