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ah, fair

That is an... interesting... view on bisexuality. I don't think any sexuality is any more suited to her than any other, but bi rep makes me happy cos there's less ...

Ohhh okay, I guess I'm just imposing plot tropes on it xD Also looking at the next Bit chapter I take back what I said about chapter length anyway :P

Haha yeah I spotted some of those spam reviews. Was going to deal with them but was unfortunately quite busy. I believe you! I can tell you are smart enough ...

I wouldn't put too much pressure on yourself - this is basically a very long word war at this point, and we always say of word wars that you should ...

Totally agree, yeah

Yeah, I think for the most part you did that quite well, which is what I meant by you dealing with the form-filling better than a lot of people would ...

While I'm not really sure what you mean right now I've decided to read the other chapters anyway, so I'll let you know in four reviews xD

also btw, what are your plans for posting now that the LMS word count demands are going to start getting crazy? xD

Yeah, since it's Focci's first person and he would never say that aloud to Tejal who is obviously also aware of this fact... Maybe something like how they'd really hoped ...

Ahhh I see! That makes more sense xD

Nah, there's probably a balance to be struck. Keep working at it :)

Okay I have to get out of bed before I review this but I love you for giving Focci two mothers. Your representation is so good in this story

(Not that I know what the specific truth is)

Ah, interesting. Entirely fair enough :) (never let the truth get in the way of a good sci-fi scene!)