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Oh wow thank you so much! Yeah, I have two pretty dedicated reviewers but I think the one who hasn't reviewed this chapter yet has had some pretty intense grad ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I've been meaning to say, I wasn't sure what you meant by "go into characters' thoughts" for ages. Something you said on a Tayburn Zoo ...

Oh and thanks for the review :D

Azazel from X-men is actually just about the right shade yes! And *writes down order on waiter pad* sure thing, more description coming right up!

Me, make logical decisions about dangerous animals? Pfffft Thanks for the review :P

Hey Shady! I actually had an idea in my head for the media thing but forgot to mention it. I think Neuromax need their brains to stay active so that ...

Hmmm i can't quite remember why I mentioned Neuromax the first time. I think the idea was that they knew he had worked for them at some point but now ...

Oh also, might want to stick in a trigger warning for abortion? Just in case someone's been through that; I imagine it can be pretty traumatic

Also, our paths have crossed once actually. I reviewed and honestly sometimes I still get the melody I made up for it stuck in my head. It's very haunting!

Hey, thanks for the review! Not that you need me giving you review feedback but this was exactly the right amount of encouraging and deconstructing. I totally get what you ...

Hmm... how would you go about having a character display a change like that. As in, normally she's cool and collected, but here she sort of snaps. Also yeah, the ...

alright, in that case consider the chapter you've just finished chapter 1. Do you think that would be any better for the pacing? or would the classification not make that ...

also, do you think it would help if "chapter 1" was described as a prologue, since it's just establishing the context of the story? i was worried about it being ...

hmm okay so i was thinking that josie having new abilities would be a plot point in itself. i think given that specification we're probably looking at a big problem ...

Hmm I know exactly what you mean about why is any given moment the start of the story. I actually had this issue with my last project too where there ...