ExOmelas

Thanks fraey! Yeah in terms of describing him my plan is for him to head to his treehouse (which is a sort of dressing room type thing, will explain in ...

Thanks so much for the review! I think the dynamic that leads to them knowing his name but him not knowing theirs is basically celebrity? Like, local celebrity. Maybe like ...

ahhh yeah i get what you mean. essentially making it clear why he's not acting, by showing what's going on in his head. i'll definitely try and write some stuff ...

Hey, just remembered I hadn't replied to this. So, in terms of stakes, I kind of want Janny to feel defeated by this point? This is his second time being ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I guess this isn't coming through that well but the idea for Janny is someone who's a bit upright, and doesn't really think outside of ...

Ooh that's a good idea about the frog! Also I thiiink the chicken bones was a specific thing? Honestly it's so long ago I barely remember but I think Dexi ...

Thanks so much! It's lovely to hear that you're enjoying my story :)

Those weird % things are what happen when you try to type an apostrophe on mobile xD

Oh hey thanks for this! I wasn%u2019t expecting to get any more reviews on something posted so long ago. If you like, I could give you a summary so you ...

there's a category for "Other" that might work. this is the kind of stuff in there

Hey Doss, thanks for reviewing so quick! With Patrick separated from the rest of the characters, it's going to be necessary for some of the action to be told from ...

Hey, yeah, I get a lot of what this is saying. I get into this conundrum where whenever I have anything taking place in a city I feel the need ...

Hey, yeah, I get a lot of what this is saying. I get into this conundrum where whenever I have anything taking place in a city I feel the need ...

Ignore all those % signs. That is apparently what happens when you attempt to type an apostrophe on mobile xD

Hey, thanks for the review! I do that a lot with dialogue tags - get scared of it becoming just he said-she said - and go over the top. I ...