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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 3: The Gilmore Guy and Mariano Girl

    Hiya, I have very little else to do tonight so have another review! The teacher extended his hand for Jess to shake. In his shock Jess accepted. ā€œI’m Mr. Medina.ā€ ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 2: The Gilmore Guy and Mariano Girl

    Hiya, again with the length this might take a while but I'm going to try and get it done before midnight (about an hour) so here we go! Every time ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1: The Gilmore Guy and Mariano Girl

    Hey, I've never seen Gilmore girls fanfiction on here before! I have to review this! I wasn't going to do any line by line comments because this was so long ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: Forget So Easily!

    Hey there, I'm kicking off RevMo by getting stuck into the Green Room! So, the format of this is somewhat confusing. It's not exactly a story, though there are some ...

    Sep 1, 2019
  • Script » Film, Narrative Re: Deleted.

    Hey, I wasn't sure if I was going to review the film script version but I was like halfway through reading it before I realised so figured I might as ...

    Sep 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 10.2

    Hey, I'm not sure if you're still writing this what with you working on a script, but I thought I'd review anyway. Nit-picks and nice moments: winding staircase to the ...

    Aug 15, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 10.1

    Hey Oli, my motivation is in a slightly weird place at the moment where I have energy but don't want to write just now, so have a review! Nit-picks: Ethan ...

    Aug 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 9.2

    Hey Oli, saw the index then realised there was a new chapter up. Nit-picks: The Two Wolves diner was almost deserted: all it held was a trucker at the counter ...

    Jul 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 9.1

    Hey, since it's review day figured I better get moving before it's over! Nit-picks: Rhys blinked as realization dawned on him. His stomach twisted and he looked away, skin crawling. ...

    Jun 30, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 8.2

    Oops, I didn't notice this was up. Let's remedy my lack of review! Nit-picks: "You slept with a guy that lives in your building? And you didn't even know his ...

    Jun 22, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 11.1

    Hey Pan, I'm trying desperately to keep my team tortoise streak alive but don't have the energy for the green room xD Nit-picks and nice moments: Daisy still unsettled her, ...

    Jun 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Other Re: The broken suns: prologue

    Hey there, attempting to sneak in a review for Team Tortoise before my counter restarts! I would normally start with nit-picks but you only have one which is a repeat ...

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 8.1

    Hey Oli, believe it or not I almost completely forgot reviewing was a thing today. Let's get nice and caught up shall we! Nit-picks and nice moments: Leah was first, ...

    Jun 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 7.3

    I'm attempting to do a thing for uni and I've discovered that i hate words and they won't sit where i want them to, so figured i better give myself ...

    Jun 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 7.2

    Day 5 here we go! Nit-picks and nice moments: Leah glanced up at him as Ethan took the seat beside her. "You sound pretty sure of that." Does she mean ...

    Jun 5, 2019


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