ExOmelas

Guess who's back... back again... Nit-picks and nice moments: she took somewhere right under three minutes to travel from one end to the other. Something about that phrasing is just ...

Hihihihihi I'm here! I didn't get a position in a society that I wanted today so I'm throwing myself into YWS and this is my first review stop! Also I've ...

Hey, I think this will be the only chapter of this I review today (it being 2am) but I'll try and get to the other two tomorrow :) A year ...

Alright, let's do this! Nit-picks and nice moments: Perhaps that was why they changed shoes, Asha mused. I don't think you need the "Asha mused". Asha was almost startled when ...

And like a week after I started reading this, I am finally here to review. Nit-picks: All of the things I thought I knew about the woman I was named ...

Heyyyy Lizz! I know I'm breaking the self-deprecation rule here, but I really do feel that I ought to mention I don't review poetry much. So if I'm a little ...

I am so torn between using this for team tortoise tomorrow instead of diving into the depths of the green room, and reviewing it now in case two people get ...

Now that I have caught up with this again I'm not letting these slip out of the green room before I get to review xD Nit-picks: While it is becoming ...

Hiya, I have somehow found myself doing Team Tortoise this month so here goes day 6! Nit-picks: Creating a wall around the half-octagonal were pillared speakers The half-octagonal what? The ...

Hi again! Let's get started on the story proper then shall we :) Nit-picks: The piano players’ face was painted with the marks of his gods. This is the possibly ...

Hi there, I've just discovered that I'm still live for Team Tortoise so I figured I'd get a daily review in and see how long this can last. (I'm not ...

Hey there, I think I might just fit this review in before I have to go to bed. So, I think the first thing this could benefit from is being ...

Okay, I figure since I now understand what you mean by otherkin, I'm going to read this second chapter and see if that changes my understanding of it. Again, not ...

Hi there, I just saw your second chapter in the green room and wanted to check it out from the title, figured I might as well read this one first. ...

Hey Radrook, figured I might as well get a review in while the tv show I'm trying to watch buffers... The subject matter you've chosen here is definitely interesting. One ...