Eveningstar

Sorry. A duplicate review was submitted, somehow.

Thank you so much for such a constructive review! Seriously, nobody's ever given this much effort to critique my writing, and I really appreciate it. And thanks for referring me ...

Thank you

Thank you for the lovely review! :)

You are very welcome! This poem really touched me a lot, so I'm glad that I was able to express that in my review. Keep writing!

Thank you so much! Your reviews are some of the most constructive I've ever had. And you're absolutely right about the missing 'the' in the 2nd stanza. I'll go and ...

Thank you for reading and reviewing! And thanks for the book suggestion too. I haven't read it yet, but I'll definitely do so now. It sounds very interesting!

Thank you so much for the lovely review! And you're right, the double 'in' does sound a bit hackneyed. Thanks for pointing that out to me.

You know actually that's quite a brilliant suggestion. It does sound more powerful that way too, though the rhythm stumbles a little bit since all the previous rhymes were in ...

Thank you for the lovely review! And you are absolutely right! I do have trouble matching the rhymes to the rhythm of the lines. Meter is the one area of ...

Sorry, I submitted this without marking it as a review by mistake! :p

Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a detailed review! It was very constructive and I will certainly try to keep the sporadic rhyming in check ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a detailed review! It was very constructive and I will certainly try to keep the sporadic rhyming in check ...

Thank you so much! :)