Evander

Thank you so much for the review! The disconnect with the stanzas is probably aided in part by the fact that I wrote this during a poetry jam where I ...

Thank you!

Thanks for the review, Kayla! As for what I was trying to portray and get across, I'm a bit... not sure of that myself? When I was walking out of ...

You do have a knack for building up worlds, introducing the scene, and painting a pretty picture with the tone in your characters.

okay so like i really like the lyrics and the message, so uh, i'm leaving a comment just to let you know how much i like this

The thing is, the two line note at the bottom does entirely aid the message. It sets it in a tone that would have been lost. It clarifies that this ...

I wouldn't mind at all!

Perspective is always useful.

What sections could I have worded better? I'm honestly looking to improve this!

Thank you!

Thanks! Although, I'm curious, what makes my poem so good?

Thank you so much for the review! This is where I think 'kill your darlings' comes into play in the editing process, because I love both of those scenes with ...

okay, so like, i owe you one thousand reviews now. Is this the post the mother is writing, or is this about the mother? Who is "her?" Okay! So this ...

okay, so like, i owe you one thousand reviews now. Is this the post the mother is writing, or is this about the mother? Who is "her?" Okay! So this ...

Oh! I must have been really tired when I submitted this, because it was under Novel/Chapter when it really should have been under Short Story! That was a mistake on ...