Evander

Yeah, the ending is definitely predictable. I'm thinking of doing an entire rewrite (I'm probably going to keep the flashbacks in? But I'll try to rework them) and trying to ...

Thank you so much for the review!

I really enjoyed reading this story! (And wow, that ending hit me like a ton of bricks.) Keep up the good work!

That sounds pretty cool! I'll put it on my Goodreads list!

Haha, basically everyone in my family falls under the autism spectrum in some fashion. I'm not sure if we're an anomaly or not? My mom used to blatantly deny the ...

Alright! So, I've left it purposefully ambiguous regarding the actual nature of the children. In my head, they're mistreated, undiagnosed autistic kids but I also tried to leave the door ...

Alright! So those little errors (with the dashes and such) should be cleaned up now. I'll definitely take your opinion about dialogue tags into account! That's something I never considered ...

(also I'll give a better response to this review when I get back home. But seriously, thank you so much.)

Thank you so much for the review, Hatt! (Wow, I should definitely start finishing earlier in the week so I have time and distance to proofread a bit better.) This ...

Heyo! So this was really intended to be a short story, but thank you for the feedback! What specific elements led you to believe that it's a part of a ...

HEY I DIDN'T THINK YOU WERE UP HELLOOO

Thank you so much for the review! It helped out a lot and I really appreciate it!

Ooooh man I should really start proofreading my stories before posting. I can't believe I let all of those little things pass by me. (I fixed the "and then we%u2019ll ...

For teleportation: I've read the first chapter twice and I still don't understand why he couldn't just teleport into the school. If he has to do it when no one ...

Ohhhh. That clarifies it! Thanks!