Evander

I actually didn't expect to get a review on this. Like, at all. So thank you! Yup, this was actually the worst chapter to drive-by review on. However, I don't ...

Thirteen, description comes later, I won't get you started on Brema.

Oh no.

I'M SORRY. THE AUTHOR HAS SAID, NOW I HAVE SAID IT. HER LIFE IS NOT IN MY HANDS.

You are making me doubt my writing abilities. This chapter was horrible, I know. BUT WHAT DID I DO. I NEED TO IMPROVE.

What did I do?

*hugs*

Okay, the community is actually not that poor, but small parts are. And yes yes yes I need to talk more about that. I'd say the school is around fifteen ...

I added in The Author simply because I was bored, and needed a new character. :P They will be shown more often, and will be more important in the next ...

THAT WOULD BE THE MOST BRILLIANT PLOT TWIST. BUT I'M NOT THAT EVIL.

You are an amazing author, Siya. Everyone has to start somewhere, right? :P

Thank you, Arkhai.

My characters can be happy when I want them to be happy. :P C

Sinclair and Drew are thirteen (Fifteen in the next draft)! I'm actually hoping to show more of them in the next draft and the last few chapters of this. Reasons ...

It would be lovely if you continued your story!