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Evander

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  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 5

    Yep! Cora is non-verbal, Samuel is hard-of-hearing, Lena is hearing, and Romy is just a hearing ghost. Thank you for the review!!

    Sep 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Technology Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 2

    (Oops, sorry for breaking this up into multiple responses -- for some reason, my replies aren't going through.) %u201CI don't know how old Cora is, a teenager by context clues, ...

    Aug 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Technology Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 2

    Oh, so the paragraph about Samuel interrupting Cora's drawing routine wasn't actually a reference to a previous scene. It was just Cora reflecting back on something that had happened off-screen. ...

    Aug 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Technology Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 2

    Heyo! Thank you for the review. So, yeah, Cora is non-verbal! I didn%u2019t use the word %u201Cmute%u201D because of the connotations with the derogatory term %u201Cdeaf-mute.%u201D "If she didn%u2019

    Aug 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Technology Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 2

    Test to see if a reply will go through.

    Aug 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1

    Yooo, thank you so much for this review!

    Aug 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1

    yo - can't believe I didn't respond earlier. thank you so much for the review!

    Aug 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 5

    Oh! So! Romy looks... semi-corporeal? Like, she has a physical, tangible presence now with semi-defined outlines. So, yeah haha, my intentions were for Cora to want to reach out and ...

    Aug 8, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Percy Jackson fan fic (title in works) Part 4

    I guess that makes sense? But I think the prose actually has to reflect it, if I myself make sense, haha

    Aug 8, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 4

    Oh my goodness, thank you so much for the review! And yeah, uhh, Romy definitely does not sound like Griffin's voice for the gerblins. Okaaay, making those little edits -- ...

    Jul 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 3

    Heyo, Hatt! Thank you so much for the review. They're always a delight to read~ Yes, I will make those little edits. Thank you for pointing them out, btw. They ...

    Jul 23, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Technology Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 2

    dammit *A plus review introduction!

    Jul 18, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Technology Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 2

    A review introduction I'm not entirely sure if Cora has encountered anything like... this? But she's definitely encountered some weird stuff. Like, hmm, I'll definitely have to workshop the beginning ...

    Jul 18, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Autumn Door - «1.1 Reveniit»

    !!! Alright, yeah, it totally makes sense for her to call him Justin versus Dad xD It was really just the first instance of him being referenced which made it ...

    Jul 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1

    I responded on Discord but I just wanted to add here that I really appreciate all of your reviews

    Jul 13, 2018


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