ErikaHale

Thank you for your review, Emma! I'm afraid most of your questions shall be answered later in the story. And about the use of the word 'utter', don't always relay ...

Thanks! I encourage you to check out The Snow Queen (Part II). The link is at the right hand corner, below "Related Items"

Thank you so much for your review, Emma! To answer your questions, I wanted to make this chapter short enough to only include the main points, and I didn't want ...

Thank you so much for your review, Costa! I promise I'll keep your suggestions in mind and add some more 'cute' moments in the chapters to come. And thank you ...

Hello there, Dream! Thanks for all the advice. I'll keep it in mind :) !

Thank you so much for your review, Costa! I'll keep your suggestions in mind :)

Thank you so much for your review, felistia! I'm glad you're keeping up your reviews, your suggestions really help me improve :D ! I'm so sorry about those details that ...

Well, it's mostly in the first few paragraphs, I'm afraid I can't give the exact sentences. But, there's this very helpful website (http://www.hemingwayapp.com) that'll highlight exactly where! All yo

Dejar Steggy, Thank you for your review! I must confess, you're not the first person to demand more descriptions. I'll try my best to improve those. And just to clarify, ...

Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Felistia! (Congratulations on featured member, by the way :D ) I'm glad you liked this chapter, and I too have a feeling ...

Thank you so much for clarifying that! And I think you're totally right. In some parts, your paraphrasing belongs. In others it seems too long. And if you really want ...

Thank you so much for your review, Dream! I'm honored to be adviced by a writer was great as yourself! I'm sorry that I didn't clarify this earlier, but, Scott ...

Thank you for the wonderful review, Felistia! I might post Part III a bit early since I'm traveling somewhere where there might be no internet connection. But thank you for ...

Thank you for the review! I'm sorry you were dissapointed by the Beta scene, but, that's the werewolf transformation I like and I'm not changing it. Next up, this story ...

Dear readers, I had to post this chapter early since I might not be able to do so on Saturday. Enjoy!