EricBarkman

Thanks for the review. Commas are definitely one of my biggest issues, in that I often use them more than I should, and occasionally don't have them when I should. ...

Thanks for the review. I'll work harder in the future at revealing information in a more subtle, and less info-dumpish manner. The reason for it was to get people caught ...

Yeah, I like the additions, and I can understand not wanting to give too much details on some things. And sorry to hear that it's a true story. I thought ...

This is hilariously awesome. As was mentioned in another review, there are a few points where you switch tense. Otherwise good work. Now, if you'll excuse me, I want to ...