Eric511

Well hello. This is ch1 of one of my stories. I'm pretty sure there is alot of stuff i need to improve on in my writing, so I'd like to ...

One night It was a Saturday night when it happened. It was supposed to be such a great night. It was our five year anniversary. I could not believe he ...

Hey guys. I did some fixing on my story One Night, but I feel like something is missing. I added a bit more feeling towards the main character and added ...

This is not the final draft. There is a bunch of things i need to fix and add description. Feel free to point out what I should fix, but the ...

Warming my heart My heart is a strange thing sometimes. One day I will see a friend and the next as someone so beautiful that I want to be with ...

im sorry if the paragraphs arent indented correctly, they were originally, but wen i posted it, it didnt seem to space right. im happy with my prologue. Im mainly concerned ...