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First off, I want to say that I am impressed with this essay. Besides the fact that it was well written, it also challanged me in my own personal walk ...

rustic_rebel, I like. Will there be more to this story soon? I would love to read it. The descriptions that you gave were very clear and captivating (especially the part ...

very nice storytelling, I must say. You captured the imagination and held it tight. “Your wings were hacked off, your strength is gone..." You might want to double check your ...

First off I want to say that this was a really impressive story. I like the way you described all the details: the way Becca ate her candy; the pain ...