Ephemeral

I'll preface this review by stating that I enjoyed this piece very much! The concept is excellent, and you've endowed it with some stunning imagery. Kudos to you! There were ...

This was an excellent poem -it evoked some very visceral reactions. c: I'm not exactly experienced (at all) in the field of poetry, so feel free to disregard any and ...

This was an absolutely beautiful piece of writing. Honestly, I just... I'm feeling a bit incoherent right now, and there may or may not be the suggestion of tears in ...

Very nice! I'm already afraid of the dark -I'm now reasonably certain that fear has increased tenfold. Your description was great, and for its length, it certainly carried a lot ...

Very well-written! Brilliantly executed; rather haunting, in fact. I speak only for myself, but I've certainly had moments where I fall into that deep pit of darkest despair (rarely; I'm ...

Very nice! I love the metaphor with the leaf! C: I have just a few little nitpicky critiques. First off, you tend to use "I" as a sentence starter -a ...