Ephemera

That's fine xD I'm just glad you're interested! And alright :D

Thanks so much!! :D I'm really glad you liked it :) I can add you to my chapter tag list if you'd like?

Amen sista. Amen.

Oh my goodness this helps so much. 0-0 THANK YOU!!! I didn't really like this chapter as much because I was having a hard time settling into the emotions from ...

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :D I was a bit worried about it feeling rushed, so it's good to know you found it evenly-paced! (and ...

Thanks, luv! Actually, keeping my tenses straight is extremely hard. xDDD I had to edit for a bit to make sure everything was right; it's easy to slip back into ...

Thanks luv :D I used to do the same with my older works; you always hear details are key, so you try to shove it down the reader's throat within ...

Thanks bruv :D I actually want to rewrite the last bit better; the MC realizes her partner is actually trying to take an obviously no-go shot too late to warn ...

Thank you so much, luv; I really do appreciate it! :D This is my second work where I'm wiggling away from fan fiction, so I'd really like to keep it ...

Thanks luv :D

I don't mind at all; sorry if I'm a little late responding. Life's been keeping me busy! XD Though I never stopped believing 'God' and 'Jesus' were both real people ...

Okay! You wanted feedback, and you got it, so I almost skipped past this. However, I read it again... and then I read it again! XDXD Just to be sure ...

Ah, I see. Well, I'm a patient person. I can wait to see what she thinks. :) That line? Now I'm really glad I toned down my original draft. Sorry ...

Cool guy! Well, it's mostly surprise. Thank you for reading it, of course, but... ah. Ver "mentioned it" or Ver was avoiding commenting on it? :) Either way, I'm actually ...

Thank you!! :) I love your username, by the way. I noticed you were new, so we can be new-user-buddies. I only recently joined, and haven't been online enough to ...