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Re: Vermillion Tide - Prologue & Chapter 1
I have to agree with Lena, Dan seems really nervous for his supposed age of 17; perhaps you could lower the age of Dan a bit? I feel that 17 ...
Nov 27, 2008
I have to agree with Lena, Dan seems really nervous for his supposed age of 17; perhaps you could lower the age of Dan a bit? I feel that 17 ...
Nov 27, 2008
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