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I like the plot and the character, Aki Shou Long. I respect that he decided not to help the Mongols because they were mistreating the Chinese. I thought it was ...

I like that the protagonist decides that he should not be angry because he had to become a slave. I think it is interesting that you added many historical facts ...

I thought it was interesting that you used show not tell in your story when the Shang Shou was stealing the emperor's crown. I like that the story has facts ...