Emprica

Hey, First of all, its very interesting. I like it, the way you easily get down to things. But some parts seem smudged and might need a bit of rework. ...

Hey, It's nice, I like it; well written. But you could work more on the descriptions. Its pretty short for a chapter, not that a chapter has a said definite ...

Hey, It looks promising but you I think you need to work on this a bit. It looks amateurish. First, Don't refer to people as first figure, second figure over ...

Heylo, I like the description, its done very well. I could imagine everything quite nicely. But I found the ending not too convincing. I mean, you start off with a ...