Emorykings

I want to say thanks to all of you for the review next time I will do better. And jessy what i meant by that last line "when you arrive, ...

maybe its just me but I think this is the same poem I have seen some around this category with a different title

apart from the critique made above i think your poem is good it has deep feeling and i kind of understand the feeling in the poem its very common among ...

your poem was impressive i enjoyed reading it. the only thing that actually came to my notice was the "Because" used after a period in line 3 stanza 1. it ...

all has probably been said your ryhme in your last line and the shortness of the poem. What i expected when i saw the title is what i saw so ...

first of all the poem is not properly formatted and second the poem was too long at first i was enjoying it I had to force myself to finishing the ...

its a great poem i enjoyed it the only thing i see is that the poem is too jampack it would be enjoyable if there was some kind of spacing ...

grammatical error are much in the poem and the poem does not have feeling in it its just a boring line of story it misses the feeling of a poem, ...

I enjoy reading the poem it was beautiful but it ended quickly than i anticipated

I enjoyed reading through your poem but i do not see the essence of the repetion here "your soul with your body - your body with your soul." it looks ...

though the concept of mixed meaning is new to me i enjoyed your poem

your combination of science and history in d poem is wat thrilled me most. it is a beautiful concept

you did a nice job there only that the poem was too lenght and that your title should have been dreams and nightmares