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Hey ErikaHale, I would suggest you to edit this chapter and when she says the "darling" after that maybe say a "her British accent was very marked. Aiko

Hi chidofApollo777, I agree with Harry, you should add more sentences. But, I like the start. You probably like Greek Mythology like me. If I you have a diverse understanding ...

Hi, Harry576 If you want me to be sincere I didn't like your poem. It is very "cliche". I think you could still make it better by making the word ...

Hi Cynderknight324, thanks for the suggestions on my story. I fixed most grammar issues, I caught the "men" instead of man after publishing the story. Thank you for the suggestion ...

Hi Cynderknight324, thanks for the suggestions on my story. I fixed most grammar issues, I caught the "men" instead of man after publishing the story. Thank you for the suggestion ...

Hi, Jelly BeanToe. I added a part about how she was always seen as not an important addition to the community ( that my help what you said about the ...

Thank you for the advice, Fallwolf! I have done several changes but, I would like to know if you had any ideas for the "cover-up story" of why the people ...