EmilyofREL

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm not sure about the cutting up of the long lines, because I like how they flow and it's not like one line is ...

Honestly, this is just beautiful. First scene is gold...The only suggestions I have: I, personally, would like a little back story of WHY they're captured. It might not be necessary, ...

Touching and sweet. It feels a bit out of place for her introduction to the talent show be after the speech itself, so maybe flip that. Everything else has been ...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I caught the mistakes, and fixed them in my own copy, but I couldn't go back and fix them here :) No, ...

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you!

For the most part I like it...The only thing is the wording "Be graduated" (in the first paragraph) sounds a little awkward. I'd change it to "to graduate". Other than ...

Hey Wakegirl Thanks for reviewing! I understand what you mean about the church scene...while I wanted to show the extent of Anna's involvement, when I read that whole list again, ...

You have NO idea how much this review means to me. Thank you so much! I've never had a love like Ryan's, but I know grief having lost my sister ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hadn't heard the term "asshat" either, until my best friend used it to describe her BF when they were fighting. ...

Yeah, I see what you're saying now that I've re-read it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It was really tough to write, emotionally, because I LOVE Anna and it ...

Sorry about all the typos! Yuck! I was so excited to post this, I didn't look close enough.

I love this! It looks like the critiques I was going to give have already been said, so I'll leave you alone. This is just so heartbreaking and true. It ...

Thank you. You know from the whole story that the "monster" is type one diabetes, and eventually a number of other autoimmune diseases. I felt the same way about this...that ...

This is funny and awesome :)