EmilieHaugaard

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It is really beautiful

@NigthWalker

Thank you ! :D Yes I was going for the sad ending.

Thank you :) Well, I wanted to make the poem a bit unclear of what happened at the train so you could decide for yourself, depending on how optismistic you ...

Hahaha :D :D

Thank you! :D

Wow , thank you so much!! :D

Thank you :) I'm sure you can write great poetry, if you really want to! You should give your idea a go, I would love to read it :D

Thank you ! :)

Thank you for the review:) What I meant with that sentence, is that it's a circle. Sometimes you live off others death or misery, and others will live off yours. ...

Which lines do you think are good, and which ones do you think are bad? :)

Thank you for the review :D I can see what you mean, I migth have to rethink this poem ;)

Thank you :)

Thank you for the review! :) I haven't read "The Awakening", but maybe I will now. I will try to put in some periods, but to be honest I'm a ...