EmiAnne

i think i need to disagree with Mr Knightly. I like your "It was night." It is a very blunt way to start a story, and does not sound decent ...

Hey!! Sorry, I haven't been n YWS since November, so... trying to catch up on the stories that i used to follow. I like the twist. But when she says ...

I kind of agree... it isn't a poem. Well, yet at least. Maybe... try spacing it differently? If I spaced one of my poems the way most are, I would ...

Hi! I'm Kellym and, uh, I'lkl critique your story today! Ok, so I loooovvvvveeeedddd your beging fantasy- In the distance I can see myself, shoulder length black hair shining in ...

I think that it is interesting, but the first sentence of a story isn't what draws me in, but the first paragraph draws me in. I like the name Raven, ...

Hey! Cool, I lovveee flashbacks. They make me happy. Weird, huh? So, I like this chapter. I hope my reviews are acually helpful. Also: on my first day here (on ...

This is a very... intriguing. I like it, on a whole. Very interesting beginning. Preface/prologue thingy. You might want to call it a preface/prologue, since it's so short. :arrow: You ...

I liked the series. The ending was... odd, but you couldn't expect anything else after everything that Lemony Snicket had written. I think that the only really big bad part ...

That was a pretty sweet story. You're gonna have a part two, right? Well, accually, this could stand alone, if you wanted it too... I agree with Empress, you need ...

Hey, I'm Kelly, and I'll be your critiquer. Critiquist? Whatever... Okay, so it's part two and I missed chapter one, so I'm guessing I'm missing alot. But in general, it's ...

Love your poem. I just reviewed it like three times but my computer kept deleting my text... so here is generally what i said earlier- Cool poem, like the clothing ...

Hey! I'm Kelly and, uh, I'll just get to the thing now... Well, cool story. Are you planning to write another? If not then you've a few to many loose ...

Wow! You really know how to write a story that's good and makes me want to go back from 16 to 1, which i can never seem to do. :( ...

REally a very cool story, like Rena said- i didn't want it to end. You have vey little details on appearances, so Justin and Connor could be any two random ...

OhmiGod... that story was beyond amazing. Seriously. How do you not have a single reply yet??? Well, that means that i get to be first!!!!! So, i don't really like ...