Emerson

Merci touts! You guys make me happy. :) Thanks so much for the crits 'n' compliments. I'll redo this in the places mentioned and then post it back up. Again, ...

Thank you two so much! Especially Ducati. I took some of your opinions right to heart and I've already edited (though in my own way) and a few of them ...

Thank you guys so much for the reviews, but this is over a year old! If you'd like to review my poetry and help me out, try to find something ...

Hullo! I changed your title to make it more appropriate. Please refrain from using naughty words in thread titles, even for your lyrics, poems, stories etc. Thank you!

Locked and removed.

Locked for plagiarism.

I love you to tiny small pieces, but my love is vast; ocean-like.

Hey there! Honestly it seems strange to me that you would write the dialogue in Spanish but not anything else... like the stage directions. But of course this looks joke-y. ...

Hey there! I edited your post and made the line break shorter. If they're too long it stretches out the front page. :-) That's all!

Hey! I made your line break shorter because if they're too long, it stretches out the front page. :D

Your first line break was too long and stretched out the YWS home page so I fixed it. :D

The Awakening is just hard for me because she wrote it so much around the theme of women's freedom rather than an actual plot. More idea than story, or characters... ...

Hello! Your line break (------) was making the front page stretch out so I shrunk it. That is all. ^^

I have to second firearris. Please, don't use all caps, and write your songs in verse like normal people. Rather than using a slash, make an actual line break. It ...

Thanks everyone! I'm considering entering this into a contest, so the more comments, the happier I am. I still have problems with the transition and flow of L3 in S1. ...