Emerson

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you Stella! I completely agree with everything you have said. I know almost nothing about anatomy to be honest, so the heart thing was a bit ... unique and ...

Oy sorry about the quote line error. It appears I cannot edit it, so if you can't follow it just shoot me a message.

Bek: Thank you so much. I like your two line changes, and they're not big enough that I should argue about them. I actually like the house/home thing, because those ...

You know, Kamas, it's hard for me to agree with you. Why? Because I find your alternative interpretation to be AWESOME. I love that what I write inspires two very ...

I love critical eyes!! Ben: I'm glad I didn't disappoint. Your comment on adding is exactly my feeling when I question the ending. I can't tell if it needs more ...

Here comes bad review! But it's a review nonetheless... So I really like that you did try to make it less abstract. In fact, I love the nonabstractness of the ...

So, back for seconds as you requested. I'd just like to say first of all, not as a moderator but as a member of this site, I believe people shouldn't ...

Since this work is well over a year old, and people want to review, I'm going to lock it. There are a few other pieces posted (look through my portfolio) ...

Ah! Darlings! Thanks you two. Haha Yatta! Your comments made me giggle. I wasn't aware that it was difficult to critique because it was so tragic. @_@ Though you found ...

Ahh your clarification on bees makes it much more beautiful. ^^ It's so hard to catch certain allusions like that, but makes it well worth it. these beast save us ...

Hello everyone! Thank you a thousand times over for the reviews. They were all greatly appreciated, and for the most part, where criticism was given I agreed with it wholly ...

Hey guys! So, due to angry plot problems I rewrote the ending to this chapter. I suggest you reread it! The new ending starts at, "How long until she could ...

Thank you too. ^^ I've fixed the mistake[n] error, hehe. Also, when you say "they kept her another night", it implies that she won't be able to sleep. Actually, I ...

Thanks Pen!! I've put up the edited version now. Here's a few comments on stuff you said, too, pen: "She had slit her wrists – not have open heart surgery." ...