Emerson

Hello! Welcome to the YWS. I'm not sure if you've welcomed yourself in the welcome section - I've been gone for a while. But whether you have or haven't, nice ...

I can't really quote one thing here and complain because overall it didn't do as much for me as most of your beautiful works do. S4 was by far my ...

Hello 1dering! I like how the beginning of your poem is so informal. It's a nice tone! Here on this swirling ball of self destruction, plummeting, flying, hurling, to a ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. If you have any questions or need help finding something, feel free to pm me. :) I'm just giving the usual speech because I see you're ...

Hello! I'm so sorry this took me forever to get to. I'm finally catching up on all my reviews though! I hope this review still helps. It had been twelve ...

Mmm. Do I get cookies/love for being the first one here, yet again? Lena was lying on the hospital bed and tracing the arthritic cracks that fingered their way across ...

Hello Jessica! Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions or need help finding your way around the site, feel free to PM me. First I would like to direct ...

Dearest Darling, So I'm not the first one here.. but you know I love you. And I had good excuses. it was the first time that the town had [s]had[/s] ...

The first thing I notice are the line breaks: Nobody told you to take it. Nobody forced it down your screaming throat on pain of execution. Yet you persisted: They're ...

Bonjour! So, I'm here a lot earlier than I thought I would be. You better love me a lot more than you did previously, or I'm just going to have ...

The first thing I want to address is punctuation. You don't have any, and I think the poem would benefit from the use of quotation marks - which is just ...

Everyone's opinion before mine is great - so hopefully I can write a critique without repeating them. Consider my review just an extension of everyone else's words. Anger is orange. ...

Oooh my goodness Carl! [/love] that when he spoke waves of flesh rippled about his neck, trapping hapless insects and delinquent teenagers in its folds. This is why I miss ...

Hullo darling! I couldn't help but give my love... Diamonds bob playfully on little waves. They wink and twirl, bobbing underwater only to pop back up again. They make a ...

Hello and Welcome to the Young Writers Society! First I would like to direct you to THE RULES . We have a rule about reviews and poems/stories posted. For everyone ...