EmeraldEyes

Hi. This was really bleak. XD So basically this person is dancing themselves to death. This is a story that reminds me a little bit of The Red Shoes. I ...

Hi. This was a nice little piece, about a well-covered topic, but you isolated it to have it as your major focus, which isn't something I've really seen something done ...

Hi. So this was a confessional piece with a highly moral message. I'm not sure I agreed with all of what was said in the piece, but let's take a ...

Hi. So this wasn't at all what i was expecting from reading the title XD This was very sophisticated language and I am impressed: Walls that slice the blue canopy ...

Hi. I was really interested to see what this would be like when I read that you'd written it all in one go. I think works like that can sometimes ...

"Paths of Ogal Hands" Hee hee. there is something funny about the word "ogal" it sounds like oval, but also ogle and ogre. So you've struck a nice balance between ...

Hi. So I am still reading this REALLY LONG and REALLY HEAVY work. Hee hee. Because it's been written so well you make me want to keep reading. This is ...

Hi. Ah... me reading this didn't make that much sense at the beginning until I realised I hadn't read the first part then I read the first part. And it ...

Hi. Hmmm. This gets a little bit, weird: Someone is coming after us. The accountant stroked the spider’s abdomen nervously. “Someone bad?” I do not think so. Listen. They want ...

Hi. This was a very nice poem. I don't understand why you've underlined "warmth" at the beginning? Unless that is the main point you are trying to make??? XD Not ...

Hi. Hmm. The fact that you have played around with the formatting of this work will be a feature I am sure is heavily criticised. But I actually really like ...

Hi! Firstly: very dramatic title. :) Second of all : Ooh. This was intriguing :P I feel like the opening was really dramatic: Despair. The feeling of utter hopelessness and ...

Hi hun :D So... we have already established I love this work. :D What Went Well 1. Original idea = riotous success. Not only was it realistic, but it was ...

Hello again. Technically this is a collaborative effort. ;) So I am not going to review the first two stanzas because I understand them very well. *cough cough* Anyways.... A ...

Hi. I enjoyed this. Really... it was good. However. I have a couple of nitpicks. What Went Well 1. good characters I could bond with, especially since I started the ...