EmeraldEyes

Hi. Errrr, I know this is only Part 1, but at the same time, I was surprised by how short this was. XD There's a good contrast at the beginning: ...

Hey. So it's me again XD Umm, I am confused by the opening line; “Well there used to be a special class that I tough personally of about thirty students, ...

Hi. I didn't like this piece. I will be honest. The reason, is because of the character. This person: Adrianna wasn't your everyday girl. Sounds very arrogant. XD I think ...

Hi. So these were very emotional chapters. I can feel that the story is coming to a head with these events. Obviously, the opening had to be very dramatic and ...

Hi. I like the lead into this story but I would be careful in case it starts turning into a description of the weather XD The sun’s setting rays shined ...

Hi, This was very dark. In fact, this kind of reminded me of a piece I wrote for a story once. This is intriguing, because it is very heavy on ...

Hello handsome. So this is a really pretty poem. Which is unusual for you because there isn't any blood :p On the window sill. Its wings illustrious with thrill. A ...

Wow, you write fast. So I can say the same things about this one as I can with the last bit I read really -good,solid characters -well thought out story ...

Hi. So you have a very interesting writing voice: What Went Well 1. Your work sounded very philosophical and intelligent. 2. You made an interesting extended metaphor. It was easy ...

Hi. I like the way this is all aligned to make it look like the pages of a book, very clever. The work in general was very clever :) It ...

HI! I feel like you only post occasionally, but when you do, you hit YWS with something pretty powerful. :) And I feel that about this work. :D I couldn't ...

Hi. So this work was very interesting. :) What Went Well 1. It's ironic, sarcastic and funny in places, and I like reading that way: "We are saved!" You don't ...

Ha ha. The title of this work reminded me of Batman! Did you take it from that? XD “Back off and let us through. Or I’ll sick my dog on ...

Hi.. This was cool. I liked it: She looked out over the city, quiet, serene, simple. A certain coldness was in her eyes, one that burned into the soul of ...

Hi. It's me! It's me! It's named after me: "Lisa" XD Your writing style changes with each different piece, I find this one to be very casual: I learned that ...