EmeraldEyes

Hello. Initially, I was sceptical to see another work about writer's block, but this impressed me. Points: - I like the style, the centering and way it's spread out - ...

Hello. I could tell from the moment I started reading this that the fact I hadn't read the other chapters was going to impact on my reading experience. But i ...

Hi. Here to review another chapter of your VERY long novel. XD Points: - I don't think it's getting the recognition it deserves, because it very much so deserves to ...

Hello. So you have a very emotional title here. I assume from the layout of this that it's a song? It looks like it. XD I think there is a ...

Ah ha! From the description, I was expecting a novel chapter, but this is a script. I love scripts, because I really like dialogue and the way it can be ...

Hi! You seem to have a thing about funerals and somehow making dark comedy! XD But that's ok because it's really good and you have a very unique take on ...

Hi. What Went Well - Personally, I find the heavy use of dialogue to be good in any writing, so I enjoyed this work because of that - You seem ...

Hi! So I really liked the description of this work and it was what hooked me into reading it. Upon finding it, it was a bit... WHOA! XD What Went ...

Hi. So when I started reading this I found it to be very dialogue motivated. However, as it went on it sort of alternated between dialogue-description-dialogue etc. An interesting combination. ...

Oooh. Another experimental type of work. YAY. What Went Well - the organised feel of it. The shape of the poem is very compact and makes it look like a ...

Hello. So this is a continuous poem with no punctuation, no capital letters and an abstract structure. I like it. :) For the formal review: What Went Well - The ...

Hi. I don't think I've ready many unfinished works before. XD But I like this one it has a certain charm about it. I think it's the way you write. ...

Hi. I like the way you introduced the inspiration behind the poem at the beginning. I'm not familiar with the work but I think this helps because I'm not comparing ...

Hi. The title of this work suggests something powerful about perspective and I felt that when reading it. I love the fact there aren't many capital letters in this work, ...

Hi. I haven't read chapter 1 but I am marking this chapter on its own artistic merit. I am guessing this is set in the "present day" because the rest ...