Embroswyn15

thank you very much. i'll post the next chapter as soon as i finish it. im glad you like my series so far. thanks again! ~m~

miss anonymous, this fanfic is heavily related to main events in breaking dawn. if you haven't read it, then if you do you will understand the piece better than if ...

yet another triumph, in my opinion. I loved the emotion and how intense the story got. You bring to light an important topic and you have written it so that ...

I loved it and thought that it was a great portrayal of Edward with the exception of the "darling" part. That is a little out of character. But overall, I ...

i liked it alot though i think it was, as others have said, a little predictable. But it was a well-written piece, nevertheless. good job.

Absolutely, postitively LOVED IT!!!!!! Bravo.

thank you both for your advice. I will definately alter it a bit in the near future, suing the tips you guys gave me. I really appreciate your comments. Thanks.