EmbraceTheSass

"A certain bee in my bonnet completely razes the nest, telling me to feel sorry." This part is slightly rambling, maybe remove the comma to make it flow better. "I ...

Um, I'm not sure exactly what your trying to say with this piece. And the "It ain't thanks nor Halloween!" confuses me. Are you referencing Thanksgiving? The whole ending confuses ...

Hiya! I feel like there is a really good concept trying be shown, but it still is confusing. It could mean multiple things, at least that's what I feel, and ...