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Thank you for the review! I do have a bit of a problem with commas sometimes.

Thanks for the feedback!

Thank you!!

Thank you so much! This was super helpful.

Thank you so much for your review. You're absolutely right, I do need to work on being more analytical and critical of my own work. I'm glad you enjoyed my ...

Specific Comments: Paragraph 1: I like that you start off with the two elves arguing about whether faeries exist. Humans argue about whether faeries are real, too, so it makes ...

I totally understand what you're feeling. It just drives you crazy. I hope someday you will find someone who does text you back :)

Yes!!!! Me too!!!! Especially when he's being too friendly with Gen.

Thank you so much! I love the movies too (though I think Peter can be a little annoying sometimes).

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Specific Comments: Section 1, Stanza 1, Line 3: I was a little confused by the phrase “scrambled-egg mind”. It just seems really weird. What do you mean this phrase? Is ...

Thank you!!

Thank you!!!