ElvenJedi

Heya, this is Jedi, here to write another review on another of your amazing works! CClesta messaged me and told me to read this, so I did and... all that ...

Heya, this is Jedi here to write a review! I was awed by the simplistic truth behind each and every line of this poem-- no fluff of metaphors (not that ...

Heya, this is Jedi! Here to write a review! I absolutely LOVE this, but there are some grammatical mistakes I couldn't help but notice: throughout the poem, as in the ...

Heya, it's Jedi here for a review! Wonderful work of art! Here is my critique: There are some grammatical mistakes in this, so here I'll list a few. "Lay" should ...

Heya, this is Jedi for a review! I wanna start by saying that this work is beautiful! The magical descriptions throughout the poem paint a perfect, tranquil picture in the ...

Heya, this is Jedi for a review! First off, I really like this poem, and the ending hit me hard as a sudden realization of the meaning of the poem. ...

Heya, this is Jedi! So first off, I want to say that I enjoyed reading this poem. The idea is thought provoking, and brings the reader a new idea. However, ...

I want to start by saying you did a spectacular job of making the reader think and wonder. However, there are a couple parts that didn't seem to flow along ...